So for this week for target writing we have been writing about a dragon and being creative. We had to write nine sentences about the dragon and here is my writing about the dragon.
Thursday, September 2, 2021
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Hi Lincoln, thank you for sharing your creative writing with me. I liked how you introduced the dragon with W W W - Where, What and Who. How I would describe the dragon is, it's as small as mouse, khaki green, leaf like wings, tiny claws and a very unfriendly face!!! The picture reminds me of a Tiny Tyrannosaur. I can see you are using some great compound sentences and maybe now, you could experiment with some complex sentences? Can you tell me what a complex sentence is?
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