this week for target writing we have to write a short paragraph about pollution is a massive affect on are lives
can you stop pollution and littering?
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mrs Brown. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
this week for target writing we have to write a short paragraph about pollution is a massive affect on are lives
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Ka pai tō mahi Lincoln. This paragraph shows me that you understood the instructions! You have included a statement, an exclamation and a question!
ReplyDeleteGood work on this task.